Review 1 sequence

This is a proposed two-day placement within the existing year plan. The neighbouring dates establish sequence, not additional drafted days.

2–4 March: early theory

M04 already places the early liminality and theoretical approach before Review 1. A(rt)sylum is available as earlier work. The exact first encounters with each later scholarly source are still separate questions. Do not put the completed Turner, Smith, awe or other later argument into this interval simply because it explains the early aspiration well.

5 March, Day 032: finding an approach to present

The presentation conversation and oral draft establish the date. The day is under pressure from an unresolved site and a changing presentation frame. The foreground is C01, the consolidated paragraph beginning “The early Dreamscape aspiration”. Its primary cycle home is 01, opening questions or claims, position.

Place it after the first-person explanation of the supervisor distinction and the attraction to A(rt)sylum. The existing circles/portal drawing supplies a visual instance of early spatial exploration. Its match is a proposal. It does not demonstrate the whole academic claim.

Material and construction interests, uncertainty about form, the three programmes and the site search remain around the foreground. The supervisor memory is a linked detour. The day retains the approach-led presentation stance and provisional site criteria, with matching container lines.

The selected paragraph deepens an existing aspiration without requiring an unestablished new literature encounter. It is later academic writing, not a claim that this exact argument existed on 5 March.

The 2014 article's selected quotation appears beside the preparation's cultural question. The user's later recollection places that reading before Review 1, and the deck establishes its use by 6 March. Its exposure on 5 March is proposed, while the first reading day stays unknown. The Gustavo recommendation remains a linked memory.

6 March, Day 033: the proposition meets place and audience

The actual presentation, deck and live exchange establish the checkpoint. The 8 March label belongs to the diarised record and later written feedback. The site remains unconfirmed. The memorial alternatives and public audience remain exploratory.

The foreground is C02, “The site grounds the project”, under 05, context. Place it after the river memory and the three site criteria, with the Review 1 regional site map. That makes the move from personal assumption to regional and bodily relationships legible.

C03, “Each programme provides an entry point”, follows as a shorter second contribution under 06, opening questions or claims, position. Its programme diagram is an existing drawing. 02 and 11 reference its primary home rather than repeat it. Its developed spatial proposal is available for review, not recorded as an adopted March design.

The earth/sky sketch remains an open design test under 10, with a dated question. The known cremation quotation is referenced as a resource carried into the presentation, after its sample exposure on 5 March. Walkscapes appears as a recommendation and named resource, with reading status unresolved. Live scope and community-use advice remains attributed feedback. The container change is the presented subtitle, not a resolved programme or parcel.

8–13 March: separate feedback and further interpretation

Keep Dirk's written feedback and the user's reply on 8 March outside the 6 March live discussion. M26 proposes a 9–11 March scope interpretation, followed by M05's proposed 12–13 March development of site criteria. Earlier criteria can exist before their later elaboration. March questioning does not establish the eventual date of commitment to a crematorium.

What a later audit may change

A source correction can alter one contribution's content, home, timing or status. The stable C01–C03 records identify both the primary cycle paragraph and its daily appearances. A newly recovered reading encounter may release the held literature passage. A new historical decision may change a container line. None requires importing both sample formats or building a second chronology.

The user reviews the proposed thread weights separately from narrative placement. A foreground passage is a reader exposure, not the definition of every thought that mattered that day.

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