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5 March messages: the approach, A(rt)sylum, unfamiliar form and sensory spaces. Related interpreted work: 01-U01 and 01-U02. This supports early placement, not every developed clause.
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5 March oral draft, point 14, and 6 March site speech: diversity, water and regional access. Related interpreted work: 05-U05-01.
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5 March oral draft, point 12, and 6 March programme speech: three programmes. Related interpreted work: 06-U06-01. Independent entries are developed AI reasoning, not a verified adopted historical decision.
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The earlier deck supports an encounter with a 2014 paper. It does not establish encounter timing for the cited 2011 dissertation. Related investigation source coverage remains for the pending audit.
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5 march messages
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Locator: 5 March 10:39, 10:46 and 10:54 messages, lines 19, 337 and 1020
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Human message, source line 19
Hi Shia. So, my presentation is due tomorrow. I found out that it's not due today for me specifically because I am scheduled for tomorrow, so I have an extra day to get this presentation together and strong for tomorrow. Now, I need some advice. I feel like my topic is interesting and meaningful, but definitely open to criticism. And so, I met with my supervisor yesterday, and after listening to me, he pointed out to me that firstly, I need to reframe the way I have presented my information. Another lecturer seemed to draw the importance of site and context and responsive architecture, but I have not yet found a site. And I don't know if I will, in fact, have a site to present by tomorrow. So, initially, I was very stressed out about this, but my supervisor then brought me along to this idea that there are two types of theses. One is very specific to the site and very responsive to the problems identified and very, very practical and grounded in its investigation. And then the other is more theoretically driven and is a speculation that still responds to… a large number of identified problems, but is not tied to a particular or specific community or, yeah, it is a speculation and therefore the end users are responding to the building, which is driven by a theoretical approach. So I obviously have identified lots of disconnect and lots of issues and so this building is taking a theoretical stance to respond to those issues. Now, I am interested in neuroarchitecture. I'm interested in creating sensory and phenomenological spaces and I'm interested in biomaterials and computational design in construction. And I am seeking to apply these methodologies, the theoretical and the practical, to the funerary typology that I have specified. So this is, it's not so much program-driven as it is approach-driven, although the program itself is also quite unique. I need your help because this has obviously shifted my thinking and I don't really know, I'm essentially presenting an argument and I'm not feeling 100% confident about what direction my argument is taking and how I can sell this. to my jury, because firstly, I'm not knowledgeable on construction techniques or biomaterials. I actually have no idea how biomaterials work, but it is something I'm interested in. And so, I mean, I also don't want to shoot myself in the foot where I framed it this way, and I'm stuck with it. The neuroarchitecture is definitely the greater point, you know, the creating of sacral spaces. This is a secular program with accommodations for different spiritual and cultural needs, but ultimately, it's safe to say that the building I'm trying to design is attempting to reinvent the relationship we have with death and will definitely not attract all types of people, but will definitely attract people that share the sentiment that, you know, these are problems that are being faced in the current death ecology. Also, the other angle I could take is, you know, the environment and sustainable materials and how death is bad for the environment. Again, there's a lot of information that I don't know, so I just don't feel confident, but I do think that if I look at the kind of thing that I want to design, this does represent my approach and angle a lot better. You know, I was, I'm not interested in conventional built form, and I do want to push the mold. So, yeah, I'm hoping that this can, I'm just not sure what it will look like. You know, I don't really have a design vocabulary here. So I'm struggling with graphics, and I'm struggling with, you know, like any kind of concept of what the built form should be. I don't have any ideas. And I also don't know the extent that I'm trying to design for. So, yeah, I just, I need some guidance here. I do have a large body of prior research that I did in my honours year. It was called Art Asylum, Disrupting the Architecture of Healing, or, you know, it's in the project files. And basically, I'm using that as the preliminary sort of literature review or theoretical approach to form a part of my argument, which is that to create healing spaces, this is an approach that can be taken or rather a philosophy. And in order to achieve that philosophy, this is what I'm trying to do with the construction technique that I'm interested in or the formmaking that I'm interested in. It needs to represent something that is different to all things, but somewhat strangely familiar or transmuted in a way that makes the end user sort of question their question what they're experiencing. There's a lot to unpack there, but yeah, I just, I'm looking for advice on how to frame all of this.
Human message, source line 337
Okay, the problem is that I'm lacking graphics. I do want to hint at my interest in biomaterials. I did pose a question of what if there was a living building that held and fed off the deceased. I don't know if that's too sinister as a thought, or if it is the ultimate return to life, return to, you know, like my argument here is presenting death as an integrated lived experience. And I have to sort of present that investigation of what it means spatially and also ecologically, because I think a lot of people think of death as a return to nature. That is a sentiment that is echoed throughout cultures, and this is an interpretation of that. I definitely, you know, I want to present some aspect of the interest of biomaterials, but again, it's not something I'm knowledgeable about, so I don't want it to be the focus of the argument, but I do want it to be there because otherwise it gets completely overlooked. And the other angle that I'm trying to play into here is that humans for many years have had a sort of universal idea of utopia that has manifested across different walks of literature as this, you know, sort of solar punk vertical greenscape that is very organic and nature inspired. And humans often sort of… a yarn for that in works of literature that are made to represent peace and evolution, and yet somehow we haven't achieved that since the ideas were first posed to us. It feels like something very sci-fi and futuristic, but in reality, it's an idea that's been sitting with us for many, many years. And so I'm trying to sort of pose an addition to the argument, which is that the heterotopia represents a culmination of cultural familiarity and, or rather a hint or a mysterious cultural familiarity that is predominantly presented as something otherworldly and utopian in design that is designed to contrast its context. It is designed to perform escapism and it is designed to pocket the user in a space that feels and reads completely different to the world around them, which represents the mental state of death that shakes you from the routine of your life. This is a contrasting project. And so that's why the angle of, you know, there is an image that comes to mind of these utopian structures, but I fear that that weakens the argument potentially because it might be unfounded or… You know, is it just that this is what I want it to look like? I don't know. I also don't know how to prove that this is something that humans have longed for, especially in South Africa. Like, what does South African psychology currently say about the spaces that we want to be in? This will be a part of my investigation as well, I imagine. But yes, I do think that that is what I'm… I don't wanna exclude that.
Human message, source line 1020
Can you give me something a bit more abstract and something that incorporates colors and visual elements that are not just ecological? I don't want the focus to be something that is solely based on the environment, and this feels a bit too natural for me. Even though there is this emphasis on return to nature, it also needs to feel ethereal, sublime, otherworldly, liminal.
5 march structure correction
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Locator: 13:52 and 13:53 messages, lines 19 and 284
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Hey Shia, I think I need your help. I'm again trying to do my presentation for tomorrow and really just not sure how to go about it. I'm feeling very, very stuck and I just don't know how to synthesize the narrative. I feel like I can't see and I don't know how to resolve that. I'm split in between so many different softwares right now and I just feel like my system is not working. It's not working for me and I don't know how to fix it. I know you told me that I should focus on the presentation because that is ultimately my end output, but something about that is just like not really happening, I guess. Maybe it is, I just feel like it isn't. I just feel like everything is everywhere and I am really frazzled and I don't know how to get it all in one place. And I don't know how to structure the argument. You know, I just feel like there's so much of information, but it's just not… It's not coming together. So I don't know if you can help, but I really do think I need the help. I'm just feeling really, really lost right now. I don't know what to do. I have text files in Obsidian. I have some tabs open in my Vivaldi browser on my PC. I have some PDFs open, which are files that I've downloaded. I have Zotero open, where I have links and PDFs that have been thrown in there. I have another Vivaldi window open with my student email account holding all those tabs, but there's only four tabs. And then lastly, I have HeptaBase, which is the software I'm supposed to be using to mind map all of this out, but it's just not feeling very intuitive to me right now. Or… It's not that it's not intuitive. I mean, it's quite easy to use. That's not really the drama. It's just that it feels like I don't know how to organize it. Yeah. And then I have some handwritten things. I have images on my phone. I have stuff that I want to experiment with graphically on my iPad. So, yeah, I am struggling just a little and just a bit unclear on how to proceed. I do have, I recognize that I'm trying to present, I'm trying to work on a couple things at once. You know, there's my system that's feeling really messy. Um, and then there's the actual presentation that I have to produce. And then there's the graphics of the presentation that I still don't know how to lay stuff out. I don't know how to… I have to match things to it, I have to prepare graphics, which will come last, but I do still need to have some kind of um understanding or relationship with myself to make sense of it all. I don't know, man. I'm just not feeling very confident and things are just not working right now. And I don't know what to do with that. I also have not procured a site. I've not solidified a site. And I obviously fucking need to. So there is that. I don't know, man.
No, this is not it. You're making assumptions that I didn't ask you to make. OK, that is not how my thesis is structured. If you look in our recent chats, you will find that my entire argument has kind of shifted, and I'm not presenting the program as the core of the argument. Rather, I am designing, it's a speculative thesis with, it's a speculative thesis where I am exploring theories of neuroarchitecture, heterotopia, liminality, and there's a whole bunch of just theoretical concepts that overlap, but I am applying or demonstrating those theories on a program of grief, and I am attempting to reinvent our relationship with death and grief programmatically as well. So, yeah, man.
5 march oral draft
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Locator: oral, points 1–25
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> 1. death as dreamscape is a speculative project that aims to redefine the relationship between the living and the dead, in KZN. Covering: theory, context, programme, site, research.
> 2. i aim to apply theoretical approach, which is driven by NeuroArchitecture, to the programme of the entire grieving process.
> 3. and so, the project is considered a speculation of approach to programme. the approach is both philosophical and strategic.
> 4. philosophy was informed by cumulative research began in honours, called A(rt)sylum,
> 5. disrupting the architecture of healing with heterotopic programming and liminal spatial experiences.
> 6. this content guides the philosophy, wherein i explored the principles of heyerotopia and elements of awe to inform design.
> 7. and so, i believe NeuroArchitecture, evidence based design, and [[03 biophilia]] can strategically achieve this philosophy.
> 8. Situated in KZN, these headlines emphasise two key issues: funerary facilities fail to meet community needs. tension municipality and isiZulu culture. burial is being discouraged, but it is so vital to isiZulu beliefs. largely affected also by community perception.
> 9. the antithesis to this project is a lonely and forgotten grave. funerary architecture fails: fragmented, single-purpose, lack of infrastructure, unpleasant or unremarkable. - ultimately contribute to this avoidant or divorced mental condition to grief.
> 10. There is a segment of society that is not brought to peace by the rituals they practice: some may not believe in them, some may not fully understand them, and others cannot process them in the moment.
> 11. regarding traditional burial, i don’t have the right to take a position here, but rather frame alternatives as beautiful in the hopes that perspectives may evolve towards them.
> 12. the programme hence is divided into 3 main parts: ritual: crematorium, being secular with accommodations. memory - a place for remains to rest, interactive shared exhibits. columbarium and mausoleum. grief integration: short term grief counselling facility.
> 13. exploring vertical cemeteries or mausolea, investigate connectedness to the soil.
> 14. i identified 3 key site criteria as:
> First, demographic diversity, because funerary rituals differ widely across cultures and religions. Second, proximity to water systems, particularly rivers that allow Hindu ash dispersal rituals. Third, urban visibility and accessibility, because the project aims to transform public perception of funerary architecture rather than hide it. i mapped intersections between N2 and rivers for ash release.
> 15. prefer working in urban kwadukuza, but information struggle. rapid urban expansion along the North Coast corridor. limited funerary infrastructure. only 2 crematoria. cemeteries are full. site is still undefined, pending information access. KwaDukuza, Simbithi estate. map of cemeteries, informal and formal. only 2 crematoria. 8 hectare. heightened feasibility catalytic projects and interest. urban identity less formed.
> 16. eThekwini has greater need, for space, and more information available. Finding suitable site with information. 1.2 hectare land. Westville. greater shortage of land. city has a stronger case, but land issue. less diverse and more segregated.
> 17. research questions are framed: building promote alternative disposition to burial? how can sensory exp transform and integrate grief with lived experience? and honour the deceased?
> 18. how does the building touch the sky and the earth in balance, what does afterlife feel like culturally? mapped to a secular universal experience?
> 19. how can spaces cater to 5 stages of grief? how do grieving populations experience built form?
> 20. how can a building comfort someone without beliefs?
> 21. how can organic formmaking and alt const method deliberately contrast context and create heterotopic experience?
> 22. ethics considerations, i do have a medium risk profile nature of questions
> 23. research methodologies, most on interviews. online survey funerary preferences and sensory comfort.
> 24. books i hope to procure to read, where my existing knowledge gap is.
> 25. concept from artsylum encapsulating the project values.
6 march presentation and live feedback
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Parishka: death as dreamscape is a speculative project that seems to redefine the relationship between the living and the dead. Situated in kzn, in today's presentation, I'll cover theory, context, program, site, and research. I aim to apply a theoretical approach to the speculation, which is driven by neuroarchitecture, through the program of the entire grieving process. And so, the project is considered a speculation of approach to programme, where the approach I consider in terms of philosophy and strategy. The philosophy was informed by a project that I began in my honours year, which is called art asylum, which was disrupting the architecture of healing, with heterotopic programming and liminal spatial experience. This content sort of guides the philosophy. Um, wherein I explored principles of heterotopia, and, um, I do believe that neuro architecture, biophilia, and, uh, evidence based design are the strategies that will lead me to achieve this philosophy. Um, this was a conceptual framework, and, um, I outlined some principles of design about how heterotopias are formed and, um, principles of awe that inspire liminal spaces. This is, uh, some headlines that emphasise the key context in a kzn. Primarily that existing funerary architecture is failing to meet community needs. Uh, I identify two main issues, which, that being the first, the second being, obviously, the land use, and, uh, the issue of land ownership, there's a tension between ethekwini municipality and the isiZulu burial culture. It is an extremely vital Zulu belief. To burn a body is the equivalent of cursing, that person, or it seems shameful by the community in general. So, there are some shifting perspectives which the municipality has been trying to educate the community on. And I do believe that it can shift, depending on how much alternative practises are honoured and perceived as beautiful. So, um, these are some of the issues I've identified, as already stated, but I do believe the antithesis to this project is a lonely grave. That is forgotten. I think funerary architecture fails because it is fragmented across facilities. It is single purpose. they ultimately contribute to the avoidant state that our society reflects, where grief is not an integrated part of the lived experience. I do imagine this project being catered to someone that is unsatisfied with traditional ritual, um, or there are segments of society that just don't believe in the way that rituals are practised, or maybe they don't understand them fully. And so, I do think that this project speculates something, alternative, um, by exploring grief as a universal experience. The program is hence divided into three main parts, a ritual, being a crematorium, space is full of potential prayer, but largely focused on being secular with accommodations. A memorial, which will feature a columbarium, or a mausoleum, if I choose to pursue the vertical cemetry option. The idea here is that architecturally there is some connection to the soil which may support certain spiritual beliefs. Um, and then lastly the grief integration, which is a short stay, mental wellness facility focussed on grief counselling and somatic wellness. Um, I've identified 3 primary site criteria. So, the 1st is demographic diversity, because, um, funerary rituals differ widely across culture. The 2nd is proximity to water systems, particularly rivers that flow to the oceans, that may support ritual and release of Ash. And so, and also visibility and accessibility because the project aims to transform public perception. So I've mapped the intersections between the the N2 and rivers. And, um, I found 3 potential sites. Um, I have struggled to find and confirm, a main site due to lack of access to information. I was initially working in the Kwadukuza municipality. And here, I managed to find mapping of existing cemeteries that are both formal and informal. This is a highly contested land. It's very, it's rapidly developing. very, very diverse community, especially along the coastline. I did identify this land, which is about 8 hectare, I think, which is very, very big, but it's in a suburban area. Um, which kind of supports the argument that this might be um, integrated with a lived experience.
Kiki: So is this one of your three sites? So where can you go back and show which one?
P: It's, it's this one, the yellow circle. The yellow dots ended up being very small, but the one is in Westville, and the other one is in Inanda that I managed to find access to…
Ludwig: -in Ballito? P: Hmm. Um, but the issue is now, if, as soon as I'm in Ballito, I'm in KwaDukuza and, I don't have GIS data, and I'm relying on a lot of, um, informal sources. So working in eThekwini would provide me a greater access to information, but I do think KwaDukuza it was a better place to represent the development, because its eThekwini is still largely quite segregated.
K: So this is your site now?
P: This is, this is another site that I found in Westville. But it's, um… I do think it's, I do think ethekwini is a bit more segregated, spatially. So, it's a bit more difficult to argue that something like this would be visible and accessible to an advocate for the project aims. So those are the existing conflicts I'm having with site. Um, I am in contact with a few developers, um, who are expressing interest in projects like this and seeing where their lands are situated, but just again, access has been my greatest downfall.
Um, regarding my research questions, um, I'm asking things about essentially how culture is perceived universally, and how these sensory experiences can support the stages of grief across culture. And also how can a building promote alternative disposition? importantly, how does the building balance itself? How does it touch the land? How does it touch this sky? How does it touch the person? Um, and again, that context of, you know, body meeting soil, body meeting sky. What does that mean? Culturally. Um, how does what does afterlife feel like culturally? Um, and how can that be mapped to a universal experience? How can spaces cater to the 5 stages of grief? How can organic form making and all types of construction methodologies, deliberately contrast its context, and lead to a heterotopic experience? For my research methodologies and ethical considerations, I do have a bit of a issue, not issue, but I do hope it's not an issue where I'm dealing with a medium risk profile - vulnerable group. Um, because the nature of my topic is emotionally sensitive. And, um, so I've tried to structure my methodologies where I'm dealing mostly with interviews with professionals, staying away from individuals. But I would like to product an online survey, um, to just gauge public perception in the area of community belonging to my site. These are some of the books that I'm interested in. I'm hoping to procure these. I already have Walkscapes, which is already proving very, very valuable in this body of work. But this represents my knowledge gap regarding the strategic implementation of the philosophy I explained. And then lastly, this is a concept sketch from the Artsylum project, which sort of encapsulates the project values. So, yeah, that is the program and approach.
live feedback
Hilton: Go to your site? P: Sites… H: No, your site P: I would like to focus on this one K: Okay H: Did you like the other site?
Kiki: so subject matter. Yes, you know, everything interesting, approach, multi layer, make sure that it's that you remember that the outcome is the spatal intervention, and that your research, you know, your questionnaires, I'm not going too far too deep. You can do it afterwards as a post or something. If need be. I'm just saying, don't make a complicated way, where it doesn't actually be complicated. So get the information you need to design, what you think should be here. So, um… What would be the spatial challenges on that site? for a facility that you imagine? Because I think that's important to frame and to look into. I asked for the spatial challenges of facility which she's imagining.
P: I think it's largely to do balancing different cultural needs. You know, if I design for everyone, I design for no one. And I do think that's one of those, I really think that I'm trying to be careful. And it also feels like the spatial requirement stuff. I don't know if a mausoleum is going to be well received by this community, there's a demand for it, or if I'm better focussing on the crematorium. Like, what if the implications goes off, um, something being underground next to a river, um, structurally? I don't know if I can afford to have both.
H: Those are exactly those which you just gotta make a decision on. Don't worry about what you leave behind, you know, just go with, this community, this region, even… exactly what you're worried about? Inevitably happens, and that's what the struggle is about. And yeah, the deadliest thing is things overthinking things, you know?
K: Trying to prevent…
H: Yeah, you're not going to be able to, but that's why I'm making very precise decisions now is so important for you. Because you do tend to think around everything and every, too many issues. What is going to give you the best building, spatial possibilities of exploration, much more than, you know, a very deep thing to go.
K: And maybe some things are also good to say what it can't do. But, you know, when you say what are the limits of this, and that's fine too, because everything is limits, and then you don't have to think of how you integrate that on top of everything as well.
H: But the most attractive has always been a poetic possibility, though, you know, you're gonna get so caught in the reality and you're trying to meet this community and see this one and this questionnaire- how- don't do any of that! It's working against doing a beautiful building. Because that's, there's something, there's a beautiful building here, you know? And too much of that. Ethics. Don't even, it's terrifying when I see all that, you know, and too many books and everything. I know you can do it, but you want to do a building. And there's a beautiful building, yeah, and all of that doesn't seem like it's going to make it more beautiful.
K: we said she can do that later. Read the books.
H: You gotta do some of it. Yeah. the poetic possibility of what you're talking about.
L: And I'm quite like the idea that it's, a part-of-life processes. And how does that get included in the community therefore I would, you know, if I were to do something like that, I would have placed it in the most active space. But I'm not going to argue against the site. Let's fix on it. Go with it. But maybe it is,
H: do you think another site? so talk quickly about it, yeah.
L: If you wanted to, and again, I think it's a specific offering. No, I'm just a specific offering. You know, you are cremated, you're memorised, memorialised in a different way. You're not necessarily made part of the earth again is like some other customs might, you offer a very specific ritual. No, but that's what I agree with. And that also addresses this issue of making it part of the bigger community, making it visible, being conscious of the space requirements that we are having with that. And therefore, and all your drawings are sort of vertical. It seems like a building, you know? Isn't it? It's not a flat thing, you know? So it becomes physical thing. There's also, it sits in the city. And there are abandoned buildings and abandoned sites in the whole of Durban. That's what I saw there.
H: It's not that (the site she chose). So that's the opposite. L: I don't want to confuse this image. That's why I'm really interested.
K: Because on the current site, it would disappear. Yeah.
L: But this is slightly different. If you select the site that you guys are speaking of, then think about how does it contribute to the community over and above just the end of passage? So it becomes a community garden, it becomes a recreation space for what probably those, what is probably just a residential sort of neighbourhood. It doesn't have. And I think, think about the, if you say it's the normalisation of death in a sense, why is it free-standing in its own right? But the other things that are associated with it. And I think that's maybe how it just enriches the program. I can see your intervention as a small pocket In the site. And the rest is a landscape, design in a sense, you know, which, I think, some other aspects that the community might need. So that's how I would have approached this site. But personally, I was just sort of, the city doesn't work, it's dying. K: Let's add more death. H: Burn some buildings down, So its a crematorium?
L: Yeah, so I agree. Take this site, but I think you need to layer a bit further, then. Don't be wasteful with recording in terms of space… H: crematorium is a really, in its, in and of itself, interesting typology to work with and explore everything you do. So it gives you a film bags. I'm just thinking of ___ , they did a recent crematorium. I'll try find it. yeah. It was an extraordinary building, you know, very robust. But it, like, invigorated for me, the idea of a crematorium, you know. So there's so much, even in just that, that you can explore, that you don't get bogged down, trying to solve all our problems, and the relationships between all our communities, impossible, yeah. But that could, that's what drew you to the subject and it could be a basis of a meeting of those different things. The building itself won't solve it, but maybe what spaces the building has can do.
P: Thank you.
review 1 slides
Original location: original - inputs/past submissions/review 1 presentation/Document 3 death as dreamscape.md
Locator: pages 1, 4, 17, 20 and 23
User presentation text, including selected quotations from research participants. Those participant views are not the user's own position. Images are separately retained as bounded assets.
Page 4 - context
image context: KwaDukuza residents warned over illegal burials The KwaDukuza Municipality, on the KZN North Coast, has warned residents that the illegal burial of human remains attracts a fine of R10 million or 10 years' imprisonment. 17/06/2021 | 1 minute read
Why food and drinks are no longer allowed at Clare Estate Hindu Crematorium Taschica Pillay | Published 3 months ago
Clare Estate Crematorium under fire for tariff hikes amid financial misconduct claims 'THERE ARE NO HIDDEN FUNDS' Nadia Khan | Published 3 weeks ago
Cremation, a widely unpopular practice throughout African culture, especially among the Zulu people, has until recently been a foreign concept amongst Zulu people. Recently the topic of cremation has featured in the national newspapers in keeping.
"As a Zulu man, I totally disagree with that. We grew up knowing that a dead person becomes an idlozi who may be consulted in times of need. How then, can that happen when one has been turned into ashes?"
"I may have the best education but the very act of cremating my deceased relative would be viewed as despicable."
"I support the idea of cremation. I believe that the spirit is more important than the body."
Page 17 - research | questions
sensory experiences in funerary architecture for ongoing support throughout the grieving process - the integration of death, grief and memory into lived architectural spaces?
how can architecture transform grief into healing by means of using beauty to honour the deceased?
how can a building promote alternative disposition practices without disrespecting existing traditions?
Page 20 - research | questions
multi-cultural perceptions: colour theory, representations of comfort?
how can spaces, and an architectural programme, cater to the five stages of grief, and facilitate transitions between them?
how do diverse grieving populations experience built form? how can sensory architecture be responsive?
how can a building comfort a person who holds no particular religious, or by extension, spiritual beliefs about death?
how can organic form-making and alternative construction methodologies create a built form that deliberately contrasts its context, and create a heterotopic experience?
Page 23 - research | ethics
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literature review: academic articles, books,
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photographs of existing facilities case studies
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interviews - not video, may be audio recorded. groups: professional architects, funeral industry professionals, discussions with peers,
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online survey: funerary preferences (optional), sensory comfort
8 october 2026: review 1 site, river and visibility
Original location: 05 timeline interviews/interview-responses-log.md
Locator: 8 October 2026: Review 1 site, river and visibility
Exact selected human interview response. Recollection on 8 October is separate from the historical event and proposed daily placement.
So, regarding the site criteria, at the time I looked at where the rivers intersect with the N2. The N2 is a national road in Durban that runs all the way along the coast. Not along the coastline, but through in a direction. So it's our national access road and it's sort of the main sort of circulation act.
Flatsprite was unsuitable because I couldn't go there to investigate it. I didn't have site information about it, but it also didn't meet the conditions that I was looking for other than, you know, the site availability information availability. And it was quite removed. Ah yes, that's where I was. I nothing to respond to. It was just landscape and graves. And there just wasn't anything. And for me to be proposing a site that was supposed to be part of daily living, or closer to sort of the social environment of a space, it couldn't be so far removed that no one would go there for any reason other than to go to a grave, and they would never go.
So those the sites I identified were nearby plots that seemed big enough to accommodate the program, and plots that were within those general intersections between the river and the N2, and that had access and wasn't sort of isolated from the community.
8 october 2026: review 1 speculation and desired transformation
Original location: 05 timeline interviews/interview-responses-log.md
Locator: 8 October 2026: Review 1 speculation and desired transformation
Exact selected human interview response. Recollection on 8 October is separate from the historical event and proposed daily placement.
And the speculative project starts to do more far-fetched things, and that excited me. Then I realized that it was sort of pushing me in the wrong direction because I assumed far-fetched in that sense would allow me to create these fantastical forms, or to prioritize what I now understand is atmosphere. I was just looking for something that looked different, and I wanted to focus on creating that experience, the felt sensory experience.
And I realized that actually speculative work would draw me away from what I wanted to do, which was to focus on what exists, focus on something realistic, and do different kinds of transformations with it. So I think there was a misalignment there about what I wanted to do. My project definition changed.
So I wasn't sure what I wanted to do, but it felt fantastical. It felt different, and I hadn't done anything like it before. And then I realized for speculation's sake, when Dirk said that, I didn't want to do.
8 october 2026: review 1 cultural research and programme assumption
Original location: 05 timeline interviews/interview-responses-log.md
Locator: 8 October 2026: Review 1 cultural research and programme assumption
Exact selected human interview response. Recollection on 8 October is separate from the historical event and proposed daily placement.
I was aiming for the styles that treated alternatives to burial, alternatives to traditional graves as the core position. And I thought I was going to be providing more burial options, maybe vertically, or linear, something like that. A lot of my drawings said so
at this point I had already done research about Zulu people, Zulu culture, and their traditions. So I need to stage an encounter backwards here somewhere about the research I had done about water rituals, death rituals, and local context, and religious beliefs about death within the community, because I was also looking for community-led Criteria for developing the program.
I didn't want to be specific about who needs it, because everyone dies. I didn't want to be specific about who needs to use a facility like this, because all the facilities are just ugly, and it's not. Like, I think anyone who needs to use it will use it. Like, I genuinely didn't see the need to get super deep about the end users, because I recognized just by making, already by making a crematorium that is not unpleasant to be in, it would already be servicing a need that is valid.
I wasn't actually— I was favoring crematorium because it's what I knew, but even mausolea, or just another option. And if those exist and are visible and are positioned as dignified alternatives, then, you know, maybe some of these people with the accessibility, the visibility of, like a pretty building that they drive past all the time, and they know what happens there, and they're curious about it, and it doesn't seem like this curse that culture has led them to believe, maybe that could shift a perception towards, rather away from burial, because of the crisis of land use and ecological damage.
But again, I don't want to be disrespectful, and it wasn't that I was taking a position against what these people are doing, but rather just providing means for them to possibly see an alternative.
I read an article that had excerpts from Zulu people about how they felt about cremation. And it was a two-assist attitudes article. It's somewhere in my Zotero, and I included it, screenshots of excerpts in my review and presentation
8 october 2026: review 1 river and verticality memories
Original location: 05 timeline interviews/interview-responses-log.md
Locator: 8 October 2026: Review 1 river and verticality memories
Exact selected human interview response. Recollection on 8 October is separate from the historical event and proposed daily placement.
At first, at this stage, I thought the river was just standard because when Hindu people cremate, we go to the river or we go to the water, the ocean to disperse ashes. And so it was an assumption that I recognized as relevant because I haven't seen a crematorium near the river.
There are two memories that come to mind, both with ashes disposal. I'm flagging this for writing, but basically one is a crematorium ghat where it's inside. You can't see the water go. You can see they put the Ganga water, and it's quite dignified, but you just don't have that sort of ease of mind, I think sometimes, because it's just ashes going into a pipe in the ground, and like you don't really see it join the water and the river and the ocean and the continuity isn't felt.
And then the other was when we dispersed my grandmother's ashes. We went on a boat, took a short cruise into the ocean and dispersed her.
Also in art asylum, I mentioned verticality as this, you know, physical form of ascension and transcendence was the theme that I currently used in the subtitle at the time. So I think that's where my thoughts were at.
8 october 2026: review 1 held interview strands
Original location: 05 timeline interviews/interview-responses-log.md
Locator: 8 October 2026: Review 1 held interview strands
Exact selected human interview response. Recollection on 8 October is separate from the historical event and proposed daily placement.
Yeah, I think part of living in a social act… Ah, I did. Good question. The people who seek to engage differently. I want to flag that for later. The proposition, these questions, I'd like for you to flag that for later, because I wasn't sure what I meant until later.
He recommended the book Walkscapes, which I haven't read yet, but I'd like an extraction point.
8 october 2026: review 1 site and verticality follow-up
Original location: 05 timeline interviews/interview-responses-log.md
Locator: 8 October 2026: Review 1 site and verticality follow-up
Exact selected human interview response. Recollection on 8 October is separate from the historical event and proposed daily placement.
sites proposed were the ballito, westville and inanda ones but these are superceded. earth to sky was about exploring the principles of verticality like i mentioned, and you should find the article or make the brief to find it
Registers and held material
Task master: 05 timeline interviews/ai insights - tasks.md, 8 March Review 1 action items. This AI navigation record identifies GIS, book and visual follow-ups that are checked against the actual live discussion and proposed methods. It is not an independent commitment or completion record.
Loose ideas: 05 timeline interviews/loose-project-ideas.md, Site, history and encounters and Programme, operations and users. Its site-criteria, care and programme-relationship leads overlap with this sample. Their later or unknown addition dates are retained. Sugarcane history, geotechnical work, Aresh and later site-specific questions belong to later windows.
Question and decision masters are also navigation. Live recommendations to narrow the scheme, test a community or procure a precedent remain recommendations. The oral presentation and draft establish the sample’s dated questions and stance.
The living-building idea in the 5 March message is preserved in the daily adaptation. Its academic implications are unassessed here. A future source audit should consider 07, other ways of knowing and material/design-test work, while preserving the question’s speculative status. No completed material strategy is inferred.
The against-traditional-burial position remains in both days. A future audit must test its consequences across programme, cultural situatedness and audience rather than treating one cremation paragraph as complete representation.
Reused diary prose: existing Day 032 and Day 033 review drafts. It is AI-edited human-derived writing, not an exact human source. Only memory links, order, source-pointer length and task formatting are changed in the sample. The human captures above remain distinct.
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